what is wrong with this sentence?
Dear Orson Coppola, How are you? I hear you will go to Paris last month. Did you two have a nice time? I am sure you will. Will you see Sophia Lynch in Paris? She lives in Hitchcock’s old apartment. She has a new grand piano. I did heard Ridley Craven bought it for her. I will see our old friend Steven Eastwood last week. He will be doing very well. His new movie will be released next spring. It was called U.T.: The Unforgiven Terrestrial. You must saw it. Sincerely, Stanley Fincher
The mistakes: • “I hear you will go to Paris last month” Should be- “I heard you went to Paris last month.” • “I am sure you will.” Should be- “I’m sure you did.” • “Will you see Sophia...” Should be- “Did you see Sophia...” • “I did heard Ridley...” Should be- “I did hear Ridley...” • “I will see our old friend Steven Eastwood last week.” Should be- “I saw our old friend Steven Eastwood last week.” • “He will be doing very well.” Should be- “He was doing very well.” • “It was called U.T... Should be- “It is called U.T...” • “You must saw it.” Should be- “You must see it.”
That’s all! The main problem through out this passage was the tenses. The mistakes should be put into past tense.
